I’ve been away from these pages for several months, a combination of promoting The Onyx Unicorn, website revisions and laziness. I’ve also begun a new book. Continue reading
For the past couple of months I’ve been very busy with the publishing process for A Hollow Cup and finishing the first draft of The Onyx Unicorn. The revised edition of A Hollow Cup is now available in print and ebook form in all the usual places. An Amazon review was posted yesterday. I want to share it with you because I think it captures what I was trying to say:
“When two men, one black and one white, open a cold case involving a race murder in a North Carolina university town, they confront the history of the Civil Rights movement and the fraught topic of desegregation as they experienced it when they were high school students in the early 1960s. At the same time the murder is set, I was attending college in a state that is still one of the least diverse in the country. I remember well the issues involving busing in Boston, but I had no direct experience with it. The biggest challenge for my university was not to desegregate, but how to recruit more black students. A Hollow Cup immersed me in the controversies as they were experienced by blacks and whites in a university so different from what I knew. Reading it has deepened my understanding of the 1960s at the same time that it brought me into the present where the physical landscapes of university towns have enlarged and developed in ways that are not always attractive. A word of warning: the plot of A Hollow Cup is intricate and I found it helpful to keep a list of the different characters. Alan Thompson pulls everything together in an ending that connects the past to the present and shows the relevance of every scene in the novel. This is a compelling read that forces us to see the points of view of both blacks and whites at a time when race relations are all too often front page news.”–Amazon Book Reviewer
I’ve said many times that ideas are as important to a novel as setting, characters and plot. The books I’ve written so far, except for one, take on large ideas–elitism, racism, sexuality. The exception is The Black Owls, a thriller that has several little ideas, but was written mainly to entertain. The “detective” novel I’m writing now, The Onyx Unicorn, is along the same lines. In fact, the hero of The Black Owls makes an important cameo in the new book. Continue reading
“The phantasy, then, which the detective story addict indulges in is the phantasy of being restored to the Garden of Eden, to a state of innocence, where he may know love as love and not as the law. The driving force behind this daydream is the feeling of guilt, the cause of which is unknown to the dreamer.”– W. H. Auden
Or, as P. D. James put it, the detective story is not about murder, “but the restoration of order.” As I’ve mentioned in this space before, I love the Sherlock Holmes stories and the Lord Peter Wimsey novels–I’ve read them all many times. Likewise, the novels of Agatha Christie and Rex Stout. They are all what is often called “classical” detective fiction, that is, they depict the crime, the clues, the resolution and the denouement, where the hero explains what happened. They differ in what I call “the scenery”: the surroundings in which they take place, and the flourishes attributed to the characters. Christie’s work, for instance, might be called “provincial” because her stories usually take place in small, self-contained communities (including trains and ships) and the characters are limited to suspects and those who represent the norms of her “village.” Stout’s Nero Wolfe also operates in a small space, despite the fact that most of his tales take place in New York City. Continue reading
The revised edition of A Hollow Cup is finished. It will go to the publisher next week. As I’ve mentioned in this space before, I considered changing the title but finally elected to keep the original. It is my favorite story and, with this re-write, as well-written as anything I’ve done. Here’s the back cover copy for the new edition:
“A coming-of age story and a classic murder mystery, A Hollow Cup begins in a small Southern town in the 1960s. New Hope is in turmoil when a beautiful girl, an enthusiastic participant in the local civil rights movement, is killed after a demonstration on the College campus. This “race murder” goes unsolved for twenty-five years until two men – friends and rivals as children – return to their hometown to prosecute and defend the man who’s finally been charged. The past catches up with them as old secrets are revealed and old passions re-ignited, and the mystery is finally explained.”
The novel is loosely based on actual events, though not all of them happened in New Hope (actually Chapel Hill, NC). Below is an excerpt from the Acknowledgements:
“The de-segregation of the public schools in Chapel Hill, N.C., and the resistance of the black community, is documented in the pages of The Chapel Hill Weekly. Some of the incidents described in the novel are drawn from interviews conducted as part of the University of North Carolina’s Southern Oral History Program. B. L. Moses’ Washington High School, depicted in the early pages of “The Island,” was inspired by a series of articles by Elizabeth Wright that appeared in Issues and Views, and a 2004 article in the New Orleans Times-Picayune written by Jonathan Tilove. The famous letter from Zora Neale Hurston, written in August of 1955 to the Orlando Sentinel, is the genesis for Moses’ oration at the New Hope AME.”
There’s another big idea in A Hollow Cup: Home, and how its inevitable loss impacts the people in the book. Thomas Wolfe said “you can’t go home again” but, as even Wolfe acknowledged, we don’t stop trying.
I’ve neglected this blog for the past month, but I haven’t been idle. I’m now well into what used to be called Death In Monte Carlo. It’s now entitled The Onyx Unicorn. That’s the name of the very spiffy cruise ship where most of the action takes place. Continue reading
Final revisions to Juvenal’s Lament: A Political Fable are now underway. I expect it to be available at all the usual places by April 15 (a significant day of the year for the political class cavorting about in Juvenal).
At the same time, work on the second edition of my first book, A Hollow Cup, is ongoing. The primary task is to cut words and pages in order to make it more reader-friendly. So far, entire scenes and chapters have been excised–my goal is to cut 15,000 words, approximately 60 manuscript pages. I’m also changing the title and cover. The new title is The Ornament Ground, which I believe better conveys the overarching idea of the book. Here’s the current cover:
Finally, I’m 5,000 words into a new book now entitled Death in Monte Carlo. The hero, Hector St. Cyr, is the nephew of one of my favorite protagonists, George Fitzpatrick St. Cyr (see The Black Owls). Uncle Fitz has died mysteriously off the coast of Monaco, and left Heck a unique legacy he uses to explore the mystery and enliven his otherwise dull existence.
Look for Juvenal’s Lament and The Ornament Ground soon!
I wrote my first novel, A Hollow Cup, in 2008. My hometown–Chapel Hill, NC–was disappearing (they all do), and I wanted to preserve it. A Hollow Cup was my fictional attempt to show readers what it was like to live in a small university town in the South during the 1960s. Like many first novels, it has too many pages and too many words. Also, perhaps because I didn’t know I would write more books (five, with one more on the way), it’s overstuffed with ideas. So, I’ve decided to revise it, and publish a second edition. Continue reading
The Nun’s Dowry is now with the publisher. I’ll get galleys back in a week or so, and a proof copy of the book after that. It should be available to the public within the month. It’s been a true labor of love (for 6 years), and I hope it is well-received. Continue reading
Last March I posted a piece about my current projects, The Nun’s Dowry and the beginning of a new novel then entitled The Circus. Back then, I planned to forward the manuscript of Dowry to my editor in April. That proved a tad optimistic–I hope to send it off sometime this month, and publish before the end of the year. Continue reading